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Jimmi Choos Gone Over Board
Dedicated to Hawaii

Submitted by Sonja

Melinda was in her room getting ready for her adventurous whale sighting cruise to take place that afternoon. Her friends Sophie and Ava were going to the spa for the afternoon and she really did not want to waste a beautiful day on her vacation to Hawaii stuck inside. She was just putting the last touches on her perfectly plumped pout and would be ready to go. She was dressed esquisately in a Doir Top, Prada Capris, a wonderful pair of Jimmi Choo mules and a beautiful scarf to tie over her head being careful not to damage her color from the sun. Melinda was very excited about this cruise because just yesterday she met this very Tom Cruise look alike boy on the beach who told her he was the captain of the Whale Watchers Cruise Line, and invited her for a cruise. So, there might just be a little bit more to the reason she passed up a pampered afternoon with the girls, but what could she do? She could not allow those beautiful eyes to become sad with disappointment, it was her civic duty as a guest on the island.

As Melinda boards the ship, she is just a teensy bit nervous about how she will get her new love interest all to herself when he is the one who will be driving (or whatever you do with a ship) this big thing. Then it came to her!! As she tries to entise him with her 48" of blissfull gams by dangling them over the edge of the ship, she will accidently lose a Jimmi Choo over board. And what man that gorgeous would not appreciate the beauty of a great pair of shoes? He would have to go over board and save her accessory from the whales!!

She is all in place to dangle her gams over the side of the boat, and suddenly a huge wave rocks the ship so hard that she loses her balance, both shoes go flying overboard and she falls backwards, her head hitting hard on the deck, and the next thing she knows she is being awaken by the Tom Cruise clone giving her mouth to mouth!!!! How lucky can she get? Then it occurs to her that she has two perfectly pedicured feet feeling terribly naked. Then she remembers! Her shoes!!!! SHe begins to ask Tom Cruise if he was able to save her shoes as well, and then she just got lost in those beautiful doe eyes and completely forgot about her shoes and everything else, she even left her scarf on the deck as he lifted her with his very strong Rambo like arms. From that moment on she knew this had to be true love. After all, if he could make her forget about her Jimmi Choos, he must be the one.


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