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Timeless Love

Akua
Dedicated to The Great People of Hawaii

Submitted by Michael

She stood before me thru the haze of first light.
The sun shown upon her and it was love at first sight.
She graciously welcomed me in the spirit of aloha.
Her touch so soft, so warm.

I miss her gentle caress on my face
and how she playfully messed my hair.
So young, so full of life, her scent so sweet,
swirled as an aura of fragrance about her.

She excited me.
She challenged me.
At times she was bold, dangerous
or even forbidden.

Yet, she is romantic, cultered, natural
and awe inspiringly beautiful.
She asked for nothing more than my respect.
I was honored by her embrace.

She is sensually hypnotic.
Her rythem native, pure and exotic.
Her dance so spiritual and seductive.
She is forever enchanting.

She fed me the bounty of land and sea
and I became lost in all her majesty.
She cleansed me of my earthly cares
and her passion rooted deeply within my heart.

Never before had I known such peace.
My life filled as did the sails that brought me to her.
Our time passed as quickly as a morning rain
and I had reached the end of my rainbow.

The gray clouds echoed my sadness as I watched her fade into the horizon,waving one last Mahalo.
Growing ever stronger was my desire to return.
Tempered only by my acceptance that she doesn't belong to me.

She taught me the meaning of paradise.
She gave me a gift of joy.
Her name is Hawaii...
and I will always love her so.


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